Mister: Wrong Review

Title: Mister: Wrong

Author: Tootsie Miller

Publication Date: June 14, 2016

Pages: 297

Genres: Fiction, Erotic Romance, New Adult

Audience: 18+

Source: Given by author in return for an honest review.

Stars: 2.5 out of 5

~This book is about a naïve small town country girl Lesley who moves to the big apple to fulfill her dream of becoming a famous ballerina. When she doesn’t make it, she refuses to move back home to admit defeat. She stays in the city and that is where she meets to devil himself. Mister is good at ruining women’s lives and fears he will do the same to Lesley. Will she fall for the devil and will he be able to return those feelings?~

Okay, this book had a lot going for it, but it had a lot of things standing in its way from making it amazing for me. What I liked about this book was that it had an amazing storyline and told an interesting story. I liked how the book ended and all the obstacles that the couple had to go through together was very entertaining.  

What I didn’t like about the book was that there were a lot of grammatical errors on almost every page. For an avid reader, this took a lot of enjoyment away from the book. I didn’t like that parts of the book were rushed and obvious. The characters seemed to be a little too cliché for my liking. The girl and guy automatically fall for each other and act as though they’ve known each other forever, when in reality it was only a couple hours. I also don’t like books where the characters are like, “I must ruin our relationship in order to save the other person.” I don’t understand why author put this into their books. It drives me crazy. 

I believe that if the grammatical errors were fixed and a little more detail was put into the book, then it would be amazing. Tootsie Miller had an amazing idea with this book, the execution was slightly lacking. Overall, I did like this book regardless of the flaws that it had. I loved the dynamic of Lesley and Mister and they both had very interesting back stories. I would recommend this book to other’s who liked books with a strong alpha. Tootsie Miller did a good job and I hope to read her other work in the future.